Published On: November 27, 2024

29 thoughts on “Episode 5-11

  1. YES!!!! She’s free

    1. WOOH!

      She’s about to free her hands on Quinna too 😭

  2. Froggy’s such a drama queen

  3. Well you tried Nia. It looks like you’ve gained a little respect from Quinna, and stalled enough for Yasha to commence the shonen butt kicking.

    1. Yeah! Nia did do a lot here for someone with no powers. But changing Quinna’s mind just wasn’t gonna happen.

  4. Ouch. Cat fight 😂

  5. The Circus crew are a colourful bunch PFFFT. Nia’s such a real good friend 🥰

    1. They certainly are lol. I left out a couple more here in terms of showing their personalities :P. Zoomy was the “red demon” looking girl, she has an interesting double personality but we’ll see more of all these whackos eventually!

      Nia’s a real one! This could have panned out very bad for her but thankfully it panned out okay so far :O

  6. The Pirates are kind of funny but their loyalty to Circus is scary

    1. Yeah, they’re all super loyal for different reasons, some of them fear like Quinna lol

  7. Yasha coming back into the game 🔥🔥

    1. Haha finally! Sin, Gori, and Nia will all come into play too here in the final stretch. But Yasha will definitely be the one giving the most…impact XP

    2. She’s going to go off lol

  8. Quinna is making sense. But to some, it’s not worth throwing your soul away just to survive.

    1. Yeah it’s harda to argue with Quinna here. I mean she’s definitely been going about it in a forceful and initial violent way, but now that she and Nia are just talking, it’s hard to blame her given how powerful Circus is. Though maybe there is an alternative? If there is one she certainly is not open to that possibility!

  9. All these personalities clashing is really entertaining. Such evil people but they’re all human in their ways too. Yasha’s finally awake 🕺

  10. 👀 Damn I see you Nia

    1. Nia stuns always, I think Yasha would agree hahaha.

  11. I love the villains in this comci

  12. WTF was that WIP in the discord, btw. That is a sick merperson design. And it’s interesting you’re bringing back Henry earlier in the story. But why are they talking about social constructs . Is it one of those merpeople fictional racism things like One Piece? Or they just waxing about social constructs 💀 I’m looking forward to that lol.

    1. XD Thanks! Yeah I’m excited to introduce merpeople in that touch up page, it’s probably the page after next page tbh.

      It’s actually pretty anti climactic, you’ll see. What I can say is they’re just talking about something random, before we cut them and Henry mentions social constructs off handedly lmao.

      Nah tbh, some of my stories will definitely touch on racism and discrimination in some arcs but I try to avoid that with magical non human creatures as a proxy. Just a personal choice, I do like what One Piece did with fishmen though, it was interesting. Fictional discrimination is usually a trope I challenge myself to stick with the humans in the story like with the Aghimayan people in Final Paradise! (Aicha is one) .

      1. Lol. Fair enough. I don’t care as long as I can see Henry again. You did him pretty dirty man. Aika’s the girl who’s a math teacher and femme fatale trying to get secrets on Alcibiades right?

        1. It’s so funny that you like Henry that much 😭. Yes exactly! Those little wiki outlines i posted will most definitely change a bit but for the most part that’s exactly what I have planned for her. Had a wip on the FP site of her I’m sure you saw lol. I dunno why my site keeps reverting my author posts sometimes, I just said screw it I’m tired of retyping them xD.

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